container ku
I enjoyed a blog called One Deep Breath, where Susan and Jennifer offer weekly haiku writing prompts.
The Dec. 10 topic is containers:
box of chocolates --
the spaces that held
the cherries
Christmas card --
the morning sun warms
my mailbox
autumn drizzle...
the nurse hands me
his suitcase
posted by laryalee @ 9:51 AM
11 Comments:
They are all nice, but I love that candy box haiku.
Wow, all three excellent. Like your previous commentor I find the first to be stunning in its simplicity and elegance: saying a lot with a little. Yum.
IMHO, the third is very impactful. It engages me as reader in a few possible scenes, all of which are very touching.
love these too
john
These are very sweet. The first two make me so warm inside!
The second in particular is lovely.
these are all great! very striking images. thanks!
Lovely, beautifully formed haiku. I think given the time of year, the second is my favourite.
Marvelous!
I enjoyed all three.
Season's Greetings!
Happy New Year 2007
much love
gillena
wow. i love all three of these. nice concept of "container ku"
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